You very much sum up what I wanted to do with this fic, and what kept me entertained writing this when I did, the dialogue, the honesty in the body descriptions, a few of the jokes that I never thought of as jokes until someone said, "look, this is humor."
So I'm really glad to hear all these things works in this combination and that they made people feel good (may be the first time I do that with a fic, I'm proud)
Haven't even considered (amongst the cliches I played with) that there are fics where one of them gets horny watching the other suck on a piece of pizza but yeah, that certainly wouldn't have occurred to me. That's kinda weird. Eew. Foodsex.
And well, this is certainly in keeping with my regular characterization of Ianto as someone who is not overly sophisticated and posh when he doesn't need to be, and I don't think he needs to be for Jack.
So yup! Thanks very much for your comment, I did want to show that they are comfortable and that they are intimate and this story wouldn't work if they weren't, so am glad that all that comes across. Thank you very much for your comment. :)
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So I'm really glad to hear all these things works in this combination and that they made people feel good (may be the first time I do that with a fic, I'm proud)
Haven't even considered (amongst the cliches I played with) that there are fics where one of them gets horny watching the other suck on a piece of pizza but yeah, that certainly wouldn't have occurred to me. That's kinda weird. Eew. Foodsex.
And well, this is certainly in keeping with my regular characterization of Ianto as someone who is not overly sophisticated and posh when he doesn't need to be, and I don't think he needs to be for Jack.
So yup! Thanks very much for your comment, I did want to show that they are comfortable and that they are intimate and this story wouldn't work if they weren't, so am glad that all that comes across. Thank you very much for your comment. :)