This has about 500 words more than the original draft, not quite sure where I even put them all, but yeah, it's nicely balanced out now, I think, and highlighted in the right places. The emphasis on memory is thanks to Sam pointing out that Jack had said he'd never been to a game in Cyberwoman (which I'd clearly forgotten about), so it was easy to start emphasizing there already instead of later, really. Also- it ties in with the theme of 'Don't forget me' of CoE because I'm never sure how Jack could possibly not forget Ianto with all the issues she's shown.