ext_47302 ([identity profile] neifile7.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cyus 2009-08-28 08:52 pm (UTC)

I like how you developed the business with Jack's immortality and brooding in this version -- hangs together nicely now. And the extra emphasis on Jack's faulty memory? Brill.
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