Man the only thing I could think of after this was Aww.
Its real, I love the intimacy, banter and just the comfortableness (that is a word for the moment :P) of them just being together and having sex. You had me eewing at bits, and laughing at the dialogue- it was amusing- the size jokes were funny and I think you might be the first writer to ever call Ianto's pec flabby lol.
I'm amused at Ianto wanting pizza and beer (cheap at that!) for a date- yea pizza and beer is supposedly cheesy, but its real , and you'know, most people often have the two together when they are over to hang out. What happens after happens. THANKYOU for not making them become horny over damn pizza, and the way one of them eats the pizza. Seriously.
To sum up- there is raw emotion- it felt like they said alot in between everything, its intimate and its messy and real. Aww, you're awesome :D
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Date: 2009-08-07 11:13 pm (UTC)Its real, I love the intimacy, banter and just the comfortableness (that is a word for the moment :P) of them just being together and having sex. You had me eewing at bits, and laughing at the dialogue- it was amusing- the size jokes were funny and I think you might be the first writer to ever call Ianto's pec flabby lol.
I'm amused at Ianto wanting pizza and beer (cheap at that!) for a date- yea pizza and beer is supposedly cheesy, but its real , and you'know, most people often have the two together when they are over to hang out. What happens after happens. THANKYOU for not making them become horny over damn pizza, and the way one of them eats the pizza. Seriously.
To sum up- there is raw emotion- it felt like they said alot in between everything, its intimate and its messy and real. Aww, you're awesome :D