I really liked this... even if it was a bit vague at times and I didn't quite follow everything all the time (possibly cos I was half asleep while reading it snuggled under my bed covers)
The concept is quite unique and elaborate. And the effort with the photos! They are kool as! The 'left, right, left' square had me thinking of a number of songs, like the bus stop (which is what I thought it meant) and a couple of other kiddy songs.
I liked how all the people were curious about his 'quest' and continued along with him. I wonder if that would actually happen in real life? I must say I would have liked to have found out more about Merlin and Arthur's relationship. I saw small glimpses but you were very very subtle. Could there possibly be a sequel or small drabble about what goes on afterwards? Back story? You left us with so many questions! Probably says much about how you pulled us into Arthur's world. Oh, and I almost forgot about the adorable dog :P
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2011-06-29 02:43 pm (UTC)even if it was a bit vague at times and I didn't quite follow everything all the time (possibly cos I was half asleep while reading it snuggled under my bed covers)The concept is quite unique and elaborate. And the effort with the photos! They are kool as!
The 'left, right, left' square had me thinking of a number of songs, like the bus stop (which is what I thought it meant) and a couple of other kiddy songs.
I liked how all the people were curious about his 'quest' and continued along with him. I wonder if that would actually happen in real life?
I must say I would have liked to have found out more about Merlin and Arthur's relationship. I saw small glimpses but you were very very subtle. Could there possibly be a sequel or small drabble about what goes on afterwards? Back story? You left us with so many questions! Probably says much about how you pulled us into Arthur's world. Oh, and I almost forgot about the adorable dog :P