Man this was fantastic! I teach at a highschool and I gotta say your adolescent dialogue is so, so, so good. The perfect level of nonsense/bravado/irreverence. It reads great!
This was just perfect all around, and a really interesting look at a possibility of Ianto's character. It sort of reminded me of Eden Robinson's writing, actually. The same sort of gritty urgency and realism. :D
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Date: 2010-04-12 05:35 pm (UTC)This was just perfect all around, and a really interesting look at a possibility of Ianto's character. It sort of reminded me of Eden Robinson's writing, actually. The same sort of gritty urgency and realism. :D